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Post by xhero2503 Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:14 am

Spoiler:
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Second Attempt
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Make with Paint.net

No Tablet


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Post by fuckboiii.com Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:45 am

Wut.
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Post by xhero2503 Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:58 am

epic fail o-o!

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Post by im gay Sun Apr 01, 2012 8:41 am

LOLWUT

He has abs on his shirt? o-o


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Post by =========== Sun Apr 01, 2012 10:01 am

Is this even Anime? Lmfao

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Post by Glimmer Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:33 pm

xhero2503 wrote:
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Make with Paint.net

No Tablet
Looks gay o_o
I suggest you draw a carrot :3
my very first anime character! Xarrot10
Drew this wid mah mau5 in mspaint lol

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Post by Lucifica Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:44 pm

sn0wqu3en wrote:
xhero2503 wrote:
Spoiler:
No Background

Spoiler:
With Background

Make with Paint.net

No Tablet

Looks gay o_o
I suggest you draw a carrot :3
my very first anime character! Xarrot10
Drew this wid mah mau5 in mspaint lol

PSH THAT CARROT IS NOTHING

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Bob the Blob

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Post by Glimmer Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:03 pm

~[愛藍 金子]~ wrote:
sn0wqu3en wrote:
xhero2503 wrote:
Spoiler:
No Background

Spoiler:
With Background

Make with Paint.net

No Tablet

Looks gay o_o
I suggest you draw a carrot :3
my very first anime character! Xarrot10
Drew this wid mah mau5 in mspaint lol

PSH THAT CARROT IS NOTHING

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Bob the Blob

Looks legit still better than the anime xD

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Post by Nikee Sun Apr 01, 2012 2:05 pm

Honesty is good...

This is terrible! he has no ears! But i like the eyes though. Needa work on that body & outline. Well mostly everything! somewhat on the eyes.

-Nikee
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Post by Glimmer Sun Apr 01, 2012 2:38 pm

Nikee wrote:Honesty is good...

This is terrible! he has no ears! But i like the eyes though. Needa work on that body & outline. Well mostly everything! somewhat on the eyes.

-Nikee
Honesty is good.

The eyes SUCK :/
And why is he in gay pose?
You need aloooooooooot of improvement and get a tablet
Nice try though Razz

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Post by Knives Sun Apr 01, 2012 2:47 pm

What happened to "Don't rage on other's work"? I'm not talking about anyone in particular, since it's a number of people. Seriously, it's his first try at this kind of thing. Who cares how "gay" it looks?

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Post by Glimmer Sun Apr 01, 2012 2:52 pm

Knives wrote:What happened to "Don't rage on other's work"? I'm not talking about anyone in particular, since it's a number of people. Seriously, it's his first try at this kind of thing. Who cares how "gay" it looks?
Im sorreh D: f3,f4
I know I know Im sorry its not like I can do better T_T
I shd learn to understand more forgive me artist.
I went to far on da CnC

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Post by Nikee Sun Apr 01, 2012 8:37 pm

sn0wqu3en wrote:
Knives wrote:What happened to "Don't rage on other's work"? I'm not talking about anyone in particular, since it's a number of people. Seriously, it's his first try at this kind of thing. Who cares how "gay" it looks?
Im sorreh D: f3,f4
I know I know Im sorry its not like I can do better T_T
I shd learn to understand more forgive me artist.
I went to far on da CnC

Yeah i can see that

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Post by fuckboiii.com Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:54 am

sn0wqu3en wrote:
Knives wrote:What happened to "Don't rage on other's work"? I'm not talking about anyone in particular, since it's a number of people. Seriously, it's his first try at this kind of thing. Who cares how "gay" it looks?
Im sorreh D: f3,f4
I know I know Im sorry its not like I can do better T_T
I shd learn to understand more forgive me artist.
I went to far on da CnC

Its not Even CnC.

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Post by RayStormX Mon Apr 02, 2012 2:46 am

Honesty is a good policy. If you are trying to give him CnC, please elaborate on how he can do better, otherwise it's just an opinion. Nevertheless, your feedback is a-okay.

Calling it gay and other things is considered flaming.

Grow the fuck up.

@hero, you can get a bamboo tablet if you save up like $50. There are some other tablets that go as low as $20 and get the job done, if you are interested.

I suggest working on your basic shapes like circles to help you draw the body.
Look up how to draw in proportions.
A character is generally 6-8 heads tall depending on where you learn to draw.
You may want to draw first on paper then take a picture or scan and upload, before trying to use a mouse or a tablet.

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Post by ρяσησσв™ Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:56 am

You need a lot more work.
1.It should make sense. Abs on T-Shirt doesn't make sense
2.The head is kinda looks like it went through a tornado or something.

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Post by Neige Mon Apr 02, 2012 9:43 am

Honestly I don't even understand why some of you just say the must unnecessary things and especially stupid thing. Its his first and on a mouse obviously it would be hard to make it perfect the first time, do you expect him to be superhuman? ._____. so much for the rule no flaming.

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Post by Renemicee Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:08 pm

His head looks too big compared to the rest of his body, so you should work on proportions. His ears and a more visible neck is missing as well. The fingers should look less blobby. You can always stare at your own hand and try drawing it .
Instead of lining the way you're doing it right now, you should try a line tool? I'm not sure if Paint.net has one because it's just rotting on my desktop. . .

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Post by Kiraa Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:20 pm

Neige wrote:Honestly I don't even understand why some of you just say the must unnecessary things and especially stupid thing. Its his first and on a mouse obviously it would be hard to make it perfect the first time, do you expect him to be superhuman? ._____. so much for the rule no flaming.

Its Called ''Critisisme''
An artist should accept it.

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Post by RayStormX Mon Apr 02, 2012 4:08 pm

Easy wrote:
Neige wrote:Honestly I don't even understand why some of you just say the must unnecessary things and especially stupid thing. Its his first and on a mouse obviously it would be hard to make it perfect the first time, do you expect him to be superhuman? ._____. so much for the rule no flaming.

Its Called ''Critisisme''
An artist should accept it.
No, it's called an opinion expressed very rudely.
Calling it stupid, gay, whatever, is not helpful.
Don't insult people's artwork and call it "CnC" or "constructive criticism", especially if you don't give any advice. "you should draw this better" does not count as helpful. plain old criticism does not help the artist get better.

If you think it's bad at least be somewhat respectful about it like Nikee was.

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Post by Kiraa Mon Apr 02, 2012 6:29 pm

RауѕтогмХ wrote:
Easy wrote:
Neige wrote:Honestly I don't even understand why some of you just say the must unnecessary things and especially stupid thing. Its his first and on a mouse obviously it would be hard to make it perfect the first time, do you expect him to be superhuman? ._____. so much for the rule no flaming.

Its Called ''Critisisme''
An artist should accept it.
No, it's called an opinion expressed very rudely.
Calling it stupid, gay, whatever, is not helpful.
Don't insult people's artwork and call it "CnC" or "constructive criticism", especially if you don't give any advice. "you should draw this better" does not count as helpful. plain old criticism does not help the artist get better.

If you think it's bad at least be somewhat respectful about it like Nikee was.
I know you're not stupid, and i think you know that i never said people that were ''flaming'' were doing critisisme.

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Post by Neige Mon Apr 02, 2012 9:43 pm

Easy wrote:
Neige wrote:Honestly I don't even understand why some of you just say the must unnecessary things and especially stupid thing. Its his first and on a mouse obviously it would be hard to make it perfect the first time, do you expect him to be superhuman? ._____. so much for the rule no flaming.

Its Called ''Critisisme''
An artist should accept it.

*Criticism
Fix for you

And do you know what I'm getting at? LOL Just saying. And I already know that. If artist cant accept cnc then they are better of not learning anything.

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Post by RayStormX Mon Apr 02, 2012 9:51 pm

Seriously, Easy, you need to read more carefully before you post a reply F3.
Neige is spot on.

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Post by Revenge Tue Apr 03, 2012 5:53 am

1.abs on shirt xD
2.this is not anime
3.look near the hair there is useless shadow 0.0 and u have dot near the t-shirt and many more weird things 0.0

anyways it's not like i can do better,good for first try

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Post by fuckboiii.com Tue Apr 03, 2012 6:55 am

You Need ALOT Of work, So i actually took 15 minutes out of my life, to show you some tricks artist uses in drawing faces, (I'll do the body next time lol) I'm not saying that this are the ONLY way of drawing, and please, Don't copy moi
style


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CnC,

You need alot of Work, Its sloppy, -I'll work on CnC tmmr-

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