My first computer artwork

um.. I started this thx to owner art work event but i was late so ya just finished art work of tenshi

P.S its my first time with computer art work so plz say something to make it better!

https://i.servimg.com/u/f41/16/71/63/28/tenshi10.png

★§Bleak§★ wrote:um.. I started this thx to owner art work event but i was late so ya just finished art work of tenshi

P.S its my first time with computer art work so plz say something to make it better!

https://i.servimg.com/u/f41/16/71/63/28/tenshi10.png

looks okay,
But the body is a bit big compared to the head and eyes,
You should also make the eyes a bit bigger

The left shoulder needs to uh come in a bit~

Thx you for the reply TO ALL OF U!!!

Now I got to start fixing.....

No boobies. No likes.

Before you throw a tantrum, the following is an example of Constructive Criticism.
All my judgements are only from my opinions and viewpoints. Please consider them before you flip a table.
They may be true or not depending on your opinions and viewpoints.
This was not intended to be a form of insult.

From my perspective:
- Eyelashes should be thicker for a more feminine look,
- Could straighten up the lines a bit,
- Lighten up the shading on the eyeball,
- Maybe re-shape the neck,
- Mouth should be a bit higher up,
- That shoulder is too far out,
- Maybe make the bangs more consistent and even,
- Clothes could do with some colour.

Always more room for improvement.
Otherwise it's all good. (Y)

Sekai wrote:Before you throw a tantrum, the following is an example of Constructive Criticism.
All my judgements are only from my opinions and viewpoints. Please consider them before you flip a table.
They may be true or not depending on your opinions and viewpoints.
This was not intended to be a form of insult.

From my perspective:
- Eyelashes should be thicker for a more feminine look,
- Could straighten up the lines a bit,
- Lighten up the shading on the eyeball,
- Maybe re-shape the neck,
- Mouth should be a bit higher up,
- That shoulder is too far out,
- Maybe make the bangs more consistent and even,
- Clothes could do with some colour.

Always more room for improvement.
Otherwise it's all good. (Y)

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hey ~ Im cool bro thx for ur ideas