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Post by Mesofire Thu Sep 13, 2012 8:08 am

can someone help me out here, I dont know how to make the images smaller with better quality. do i just resize the image?
My 3rd attempt on Spriting Dafk

yeah. i know it sucks
CnC please( as harsh as you can)

i call it The glaive of nature


screw that thing. i kinda redid it but this is a work in progress

My 3rd attempt on Spriting Frostbiteversion1

this is the completed v1

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Post by Xeclipse Thu Sep 13, 2012 8:29 am

The colors they bother me :I
OT:dude shading is off read tutorials'
one does not simply sprite a sword with multiple random color pallet's like blue yellow green red purple dark blue orange into random mix you call a sprite also I don't see a proper light source I think the blade is where the small spikes on one end of the sword idk i could be wrong more effort and gl :L

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Post by †Zero† Thu Sep 13, 2012 8:46 am

Rainbow shading (i'm not saying it isn't allowed but it look wierd). Pillow shading ( mean no light source at all)
Also did you even save the file as PNG? The quality look fuked to me.

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Post by Mesofire Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:05 am

TheDevilHeart wrote:Rainbow shading (i'm not saying it isn't allowed but it look wierd). Pillow shading ( mean no light source at all)
Also did you even save the file as PNG? The quality look fuked to me.

yeah.. idont know what happend to the quality

Edit: but how is it shapewise

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Post by Knives Sat Sep 15, 2012 4:13 pm

The shape looks fine to me. Try making certain parts of it pop out by combining form with shading!

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Post by jεnn♥ Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:13 pm

Just cause a part is white, doesn't mean it shouldn't have shading.

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Post by Mesofire Sat Sep 15, 2012 8:30 pm

Destiny wrote:Just cause a part is white, doesn't mean it shouldn't have shading.

i said it was in progress

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Post by Revenge Sun Sep 16, 2012 2:49 am

The shading got a bit better but the quality is still shitty.

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Post by Mesofire Wed Sep 26, 2012 11:42 am

I made a nother version

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Post by im gay Wed Sep 26, 2012 4:36 pm

Shading's quite awful honestly, not liking the color palette.

Fix the outline a bit, the 4 things at the bottom isn't a good design to it. Not sharp enough.

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Post by Mesofire Fri Sep 28, 2012 9:34 am

I'll probably start a new version after i go to Anime weekend Atlanta tomorrow

any suggestions on what to do with the spike?

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Post by jεnn♥ Fri Sep 28, 2012 12:37 pm

sprite*
and SAO sword
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Btw, Look at some tutorials, even I know nothing about spriting, but the shading on that is bad.

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Post by Mesofire Fri Sep 28, 2012 5:05 pm

umm
why did you even bother posting here?

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Post by Mesofire Tue Oct 02, 2012 7:52 am

shoot. i hate to double post but....

Can someone assist me in finding a good shading tutorial.
Also, Could someone tell me how to post the images with better quality

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