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Post by RyRy on Fri Oct 05, 2012 4:11 pm

Ok, just now finish this in photoshop.
Took me quite some time to do.

I would to thank, no, praise TriLxS for making the Image that I used for this.

Here it is, RyRy of Darkness

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P.S. Do not say anything about a boarder cause there's no way in hell I'm flattening this image to make a border if I can make it better.

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Post by jεnn♥ on Fri Oct 05, 2012 4:32 pm

You don't need to flatten the image. You can just use that rectangular-ish select and select the whole canvas, and then do edit->stroke->inside.
The contrast is too low.. and you're covering most of the picture with effects.
The composition could of been better because my eyes keep leeding me to the text, instead of the face itself.
But yea, I think you're improving a lot.

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Post by вαкα●ηєкσ●¢нιι on Sat Oct 06, 2012 12:40 am

Fog/Mist or w/e needs to be more organized, the render is covered up alot, text placement, text font, and text style/color needs to be changed, text at right upper part is really unnecessary, or change the placement.

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Post by RyRy on Sat Oct 06, 2012 9:14 am

Noob question, how do I organized the dark mist?

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Post by вαкα●ηєкσ●¢нιι on Sat Oct 06, 2012 9:41 am

Sorry, I should have put that in better words, I meant the distribution of the mist needs to be changed, more mist on bottom and less on top.


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Post by RyRy on Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:05 pm

Before I re-edit this, 1 quick question.
Should I keep the image in overlay mode or should I revert it back to normal mode?

What you saw is overlay mode.

This is what I'll look like in normal mode.
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If so then I'll certainly need to change the text.

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Post by вαкα●ηєкσ●¢нιι on Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:07 pm

RyRy wrote:Before I re-edit this, 1 quick question.
Should I keep the image in overlay mode or should I revert it back to normal mode?

What you saw is overlay mode.

This is what I'll look like in normal mode.
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If so then I'll certainly need to change the text.
Keep it in overlay, also, dafuq is that thing at the bottom right... ouo

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Post by RyRy on Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:10 pm

That's the dark energy forming around his hand.

And okay, I'll keep it in overlay mode

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Post by вαкα●ηєкσ●¢нιι on Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:11 pm

RyRy wrote:That's the dark energy forming around his hand.
You can barely see his hand..

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Post by RyRy on Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:18 pm

Well that's the image I'm working with.
TrilexS made this as a request so I'm really not going to complain about cause if I can get this remastered, it's gonna become one sexy image.

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Post by punipunipon on Sat Oct 06, 2012 11:09 pm

RyRy wrote:Before I re-edit this, 1 quick question.
Should I keep the image in overlay mode or should I revert it back to normal mode?

What you saw is overlay mode.

This is what I'll look like in normal mode.
Am I improving? Is it sexy enough? Normal12

If so then I'll certainly need to change the text.

keep it in overlay mode, cause the green tie won't fit with the image's main colour. (purple)

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RyRy wrote:That's the dark energy forming around his hand.
You can barely see his hand..

exactly. :/
try to remove some mist or effects off the hand so that you can see the hand better...

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Post by RyRy on Sat Oct 06, 2012 11:24 pm

If it stays in overlay mode you wont be able to see the hand no matter how much mist I erase.
Just thought I point that out.

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