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Post by BubbleTea on Fri Aug 31, 2012 4:01 pm

So i was really really bored one day and had nothing to do so i decided to make a few weapons, tips on how to improve these would be really appreciated since this is my first time and i've had no past experience so i basically just drew a shape of a sword and colored it xD
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First attempt at spriting need some tips :p Scythe I think i really screwed up the color on this one i tried to make it have like a blade but then i put purple on the top idk why :c


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Post by jεnn♥ on Fri Aug 31, 2012 4:06 pm

welp, what everyone's gonna say is 'go to maplemation' or 'dat shading'
IMO, I think that looks like you used a magic wand, and used bucket tool on another layer. Shading should be added, (check tutorials maplemation/gfx section sticky/google/Deviantart (If that have).
The stick part should be a little longer, and the top part, should be longer this way <->
I am terrible , like really terrible at spriting , so correct me if im wrong :p

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Post by BubbleTea on Fri Aug 31, 2012 4:10 pm

Destiny wrote:welp, what everyone's gonna say is 'go to maplemation' or 'dat shading'
IMO, I think that looks like you used a magic wand, and used bucket tool on another layer. Shading should be added, (check tutorials maplemation/gfx section sticky/google/Deviantart (If that have).
The stick part should be a little longer, and the top part, should be longer this way <->
I am terrible , like really terrible at spriting , so correct me if im wrong :p
okay i think ill try to do the shading ill look at the tutorials and yeah i did use a magic wand and then a bucket tool lol

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Post by BubbleTea on Fri Aug 31, 2012 4:34 pm

Okay, i attempted to shade it im not sure if it looks right it kinda looks off, can somebody give me a few tips on shading?

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Post by †Zero† on Fri Aug 31, 2012 6:45 pm

Credit goes to SAI.

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Post by Magnus on Fri Aug 31, 2012 7:56 pm

Gradient Shading.

Too small.

Horrible choice of colors.

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Post by Xeclipse on Fri Aug 31, 2012 9:48 pm

more shade /I don't exactly see where the light is comming from
the axe thing look's strange to me
Put some soul into your work don't rush I know this your first time but put more effort

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