Free Time Spriting ftw

Hey everyone i was playing a game called "Rumble Fighter" with my best buddy Brian and i decided to give spriting a
chance with clothing.Note!!!! this my first time spriting clothes so no harsh comments please.
I rendered out this back item on the game which is the sword because when i drew it.... oooooo boy it was ugly sooo yea...
(I think everything looks good but the pants <.<) Rate 1-10 please.

0/10 Would not use.

4/10 the shirt looks bad and the pants too the sword looks weird and dumb and horrifying C:

I thought it was a cocoon. It looks like the sword is being dragged because of the curve.

CNC FTW <3

Okay! Here some CNC here you hoe(LOL)
1. No Outline, Wrong Light Source (AKA Pillow shading)
2. Random Shading, No Light Source, I BARELY SEE THE SHADING.
3.(NOT IN THE PICTURE LOL) The Sword was either made by brush or you rotate it (derp)
4. Don't call your Art Ugly or heard any one said it and call it ugly follow them, Always call your art is a practice art.

whats cnc btw o-o and why you gotta call me a hoe? O.o

mojo4dago wrote:whats cnc btw o-o and why you gotta call me a hoe? O.o

LOL.I just give you Comment And Criticism (CnC) For you to improve your mistake and the hoe part was suppose to be a joke which i put (LOL) behind it.
Also you can ignore my CnC or take it and practice.

RUMBLE FIGHTER I SHOULD PLAY WIF YOU SUMTIME
OT: Why are you attempting the exocore if your not wielding it or using the full exo, 3/10

Tarnu12 wrote:RUMBLE FIGHTER I SHOULD PLAY WIF YOU SUMTIME
OT: Why are you attempting the exocore if your not wielding it or using the full exo, 3/10

Are you new to Rumble fighter? Because I been playin since yr after they came out. They decided to make the Blade spirit exocore a Back item. You can clearly see if you go and check the accessory tab in shop. =3