My first-Fail

[O_o RestlessNewbie]

https://i.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/13/70/mccity10.gif

hope u guys like it.

[NikeeUltimate Member]

https://i.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/13/70/mccity10.gif

hope u guys like it.

Lol weird. Reminds me of willi but most people dislike willi cause of what he done to this server. Anyways i don't get the ending.

[O_o RestlessNewbie]

he suppose to be dancing =] <><><><><><

[ZachieUltimate Member]

Wut. What's supposed to happen in the last two frames.

[KnivesUltimate Member]

Hey... That character looks very familiar... Looks like Willi's old character.

[♥Ultimate Member]

He reminds me of Willi too..

Is he trying to shake his booty?

[VourdeoxAverage Member]

The walk cycle was alright for a first go. I noticed while the character was walking he moves up and down a few pixels 5 times. Try to keep your character level while he's walking. Even 1 pixel off gets noticed, especially by experienced graphic artists.

I also noticed that frames 8 and 9 were exactly the same. This isn't very good for your animation as it looks like the character stops to think for a frame before he does the strangest pirouette in history. Frame 9 should be the wind up before the spin, not just a copied frame, making it look jagged.

I now come to the spin the character did. First things first, it was very, very odd. The character's body spins round while the head remains in the same place akin to something out of the exorcist. Try to make it so the head follows the body in the spin and it wont look too unnatural.

All in all, I just think you need a lot more practice. You'll pick all of this stuff up as you do it, so keep trying and you'll get better and better.

Also spend a little more time on your animations, Quality > Quantity is usually the rule to follow.

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