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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Sun May 27, 2012 3:10 am

Hi guys! well this is my first time doing GFX so yeah i need your CnC as much as Possible
This is a KeyBlade: Made by my self with my own Idea
I need your CNC Keybla10

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Post by Magnus Sun May 27, 2012 3:13 am

DAMMMMMMMMMN. Looks awesome.

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Sun May 27, 2012 4:49 am

Zero wrote:DAMMMMMMMMMN. Looks awesome.
lol Thx c: but i need a real CnC, not that i dont like your comment but i need actually Comments help me fixing my problems.

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Post by Mel Sun May 27, 2012 5:05 am

The shading doesn't look quite right, and it looks a bit small for a maple weapon, but I haven't tested it on a char. The darker tips on the end of each part of the blade doesn't look quite right either, why is the tip black?

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Sun May 27, 2012 5:48 am

∂ємυяє wrote:The shading doesn't look quite right, and it looks a bit small for a maple weapon, but I haven't tested it on a char. The darker tips on the end of each part of the blade doesn't look quite right either, why is the tip black?
well about the tip of each part is black i don't know either i used Paint.net and use a Dummy character WITHOUT ANY ITEM ON IT, and make that layer Brightness high, also i create a new layer and start to draw Scratch, after it done i created a new layer and make the old Layer Brightness to the same as the Background Layer as i said before, and i keep draw like that and start fixing, i might be missing some parts too...
About shading well most of time i always think that the light come from the TOP LEFT (Like all maple item are) and this is my first GFX item so i might be mess up the Shading.
idk if its Maple-ish style but i used a Dummy to draw it, it might be MAple-ish or it might not.

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Post by Magnus Sun May 27, 2012 6:09 am

First time? I couldn't make that in a lifetime. :c

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Post by Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр Sun May 27, 2012 6:25 am

You Need A Better Palette. And No I Do Not Like The Thick Outline At The End. It's Just Ew.

Also, I Realised That The Red Stuff At The End Is Too Straight.

You Need A Longer Handle........

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Sun May 27, 2012 6:42 am

Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр wrote:You Need A Better Palette. And No I Do Not Like The Thick Outline At The End. It's Just Ew.

Also, I Realised That The Red Stuff At The End Is Too Straight.

You Need A Longer Handle........
A better palette eh? well i guess i can handle that lol, yes i know the thick outline is too wierd, the string at the end is too straight? hmm i guess i could fix that. Longer handle..lol sure.
Thx for advice c:

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Sun May 27, 2012 11:13 pm

BUMP!! + UPDATED
UPDATED:
i need CNC please help

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Post by Magnus Mon May 28, 2012 1:13 am

TheNameNooby wrote:BUMP!! + UPDATED
UPDATED:
i need CNC please help


Don't double post. Just edit your previous post.


Anyways, you need to work on the shading for the tip.

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Post by Shads Mon May 28, 2012 1:51 am

I like it LOL :3

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Post by Knives Mon May 28, 2012 1:53 am

COLOUR! Not bad at all. Kinda reminds me of a Power-Ranger themed keyblade XD

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Mon May 28, 2012 2:34 am

Knives✖ wrote:COLOUR! Not bad at all. Kinda reminds me of a Power-Ranger themed keyblade XD
LOL c: anyway update c: Fixed some part, shade fix a little, Shape changed and Fixed some useless part
I need your CNC Keybla13

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Post by Aη¢нσFlaмє Mon May 28, 2012 3:18 am

Ohh wow, i dont know much of gfxing but that is awesome looking!
Awesome job cheers

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Post by Lucina Mon May 28, 2012 3:25 am

TheNameNooby wrote:
Knives✖ wrote:COLOUR! Not bad at all. K
inda reminds me of a Power-Ranger themed keyblade XD
LOL c: anyway update c: Fixed some part, shade fix a little, Shape changed and Fixed some useless part
I need your CNC Keybla13

If u look at the handle part Ull see those 2red thing sticking out u needs make those even and the blade itself looks like a upgraded Verizon of riku keyblade but then wouldn't really match him also the chain part looks off and the blade doesn't really stand out much as a keyblade u should try make it bit similar to riku keyblade other then that u make a good keyblade ^~^ and ahh yes don't u think the keyblade a bit short

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Mon May 28, 2012 4:15 am

Kikichan wrote:
TheNameNooby wrote:
Knives✖ wrote:COLOUR! Not bad at all. K
inda reminds me of a Power-Ranger themed keyblade XD
LOL c: anyway update c: Fixed some part, shade fix a little, Shape changed and Fixed some useless part
I need your CNC Keybla13

If u look at the handle part Ull see those 2red thing sticking out u needs make those even and the blade itself looks like a upgraded Verizon of riku keyblade but then wouldn't really match him also the chain part looks off and the blade doesn't really stand out much as a keyblade u should try make it bit similar to riku keyblade other then that u make a good keyblade ^~^ and ahh yes don't u think the keyblade a bit short
Lol ty i guess. c:, you said the keyblade a bit short right? o-o i don't think it is i draw it on a Dummy as i said b4 so yeah i think its enough c:, i don't said here that im good i just say that i need more practice.

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Post by Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр Mon May 28, 2012 4:38 am

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Dullshading. Not Much Contrast. The Shading Doesn't Make Sense. Everything Else Is In The Picture.
How Is My Character Supposed To Hold The Weapon?! Q A Q

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Post by Magnus Mon May 28, 2012 5:27 am

The shading is very Dull.

The other designs on this keyblade doesn't really make too much sense either.

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Post by Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр Mon May 28, 2012 5:34 am

Zero wrote:The shading is very Dull.

The other designs on this keyblade doesn't really make too much sense either.

WINDOW LICKER.

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Mon May 28, 2012 5:48 am

Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр wrote:I need your CNC 8-1

Dullshading. Not Much Contrast. The Shading Doesn't Make Sense. Everything Else Is In The Picture.
How Is My Character Supposed To Hold The Weapon?! Q A Q
lol i know the shading is wierd...i also found out that the Handle the blade also wierd. i am
now trying to fix it, ty for your CNC C:

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Post by Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр Mon May 28, 2012 5:50 am

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Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр wrote:I need your CNC 8-1

Dullshading. Not Much Contrast. The Shading Doesn't Make Sense. Everything Else Is In The Picture.
How Is My Character Supposed To Hold The Weapon?! Q A Q
lol i know the shading is wierd...i also found out that the Handle the blade also wierd. i am
now trying to fix it, ty for your CNC C:

You're Welcome.

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Mon May 28, 2012 6:12 am

UPDATED Surprised
I need your CNC Keybla15

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Post by Magnus Mon May 28, 2012 6:31 am

TheNameNooby wrote:UPDATED Surprised
I need your CNC Keybla15

The shading still looks awkward.

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Post by ZeroLoveGFX Mon May 28, 2012 6:36 am

Zero wrote:
TheNameNooby wrote:UPDATED Surprised
I need your CNC Keybla15

The shading still looks awkward.
Point it out please o-o

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Post by im gay Mon May 28, 2012 9:13 am

Since this is one of your first, I strongly recommend you start simple and sprite a ordinary keyblade such as Sora's first one.

For the CnC, as most said, the shading isn't really "entertaining". Might wanna find a new color palette mostly for the yellow. Yellow is not meant to be a dark color, it's meant to make it shine. Shading is quite gradient in my eyes on the white and yellow. Plus, the chain looks quite similar to my Riku one, but edited..

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