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Post by oneGrain Tue May 01, 2012 4:24 am

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This is one of my first gfx's, Hope you liked it! Please give me any tips on improving, Thanks!
The Scythe is from the anime: "Soul Eater'

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Post by ToxicBoii Tue May 01, 2012 4:26 am

Nice work for your first gfx! A thing you should work on is the lighting, the sun would be shining down from the left top corner, so you would make it shine a little on the left of the blade. But it was a good attempt for your first try! Very Happy

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Post by XDualBladez Tue May 01, 2012 4:34 am

i think the blade should be bigger and also the handle should be a little thicker

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Post by вυттѕєcкѕ Tue May 01, 2012 7:11 am

Bottom of blade outline should be less straight, and I think the whole blade should be a bit bigger. The shading is weird, get better palette :3 and to me it looks a bit bland, but I've never seen this anime so I wouldn't know. Hope mah advice helps u c:

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Post by Guest Tue May 01, 2012 8:19 am

Not only the blade is too small, the pole too.
The shading isn't right either, the light comes from top left, try changing that.
But it's nice for the first time.

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Post by xJesse.Kimx Tue May 01, 2012 5:35 pm

oneGrain wrote:____________________________
Soul Eater Scythe Soulea10
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This is one of my first gfx's, Hope you liked it! Please give me any tips on improving, Thanks!
The Scythe is from the anime: "Soul Eater'
Maka's Scythe, Soul is longer but I'm not saying its bad but I just wanted it to be fixed Razz

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Post by oneGrain Wed May 02, 2012 3:35 am

Buttsecks wrote:Bottom of blade outline should be less straight, and I think the whole blade should be a bit bigger. The shading is weird, get better palette :3 and to me it looks a bit bland, but I've never seen this anime so I wouldn't know. Hope mah advice helps u c:

Thanks for the advice Smile

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