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Post by ToxicBoii Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:16 am

My Organization XIII Coat

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My Kingdom key(I rushed this one a bit)

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My Axel's Chakrams(re-edited)

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My attempt at Roxas's outfit

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My Demyx's Sitar

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Just some Kingdom Hearts stuff I made, these are my first gfx's. Hope you liked it!, if you didn't like them please give me tips on how I could improve or what I could work on.


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Post by Lucina Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:19 am

kingdom heart ftw<333

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Post by oneGrain Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:29 am

Woah O.o
If this was added, then that will be awesome! Very Happy

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Post by ҳҲҳ ÐƐƔɪŁ ҳҲҳ Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:32 am

well i will be the first to CnC this. It is pretty good for your first attempt. Nothing to say about the robe. The keyblade on the other hand. The blade should be a bit bigger and also the crown should be spaced out more so u can actually see the space. Also with the chain part, i think u should add in a few more links. This is just my prefrence but i think that the blade should be faced down so when it attacks it, the crown will hit the monster instead of the back of the blade.

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Post by ToxicBoii Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:34 am

ҳҲҳ ÐƐƔɪŁ ҳҲҳ wrote:well i will be the first to CnC this. It is pretty good for your first attempt. Nothing to say about the robe. The keyblade on the other hand. The blade should be a bit bigger and also the crown should be spaced out more so u can actually see the space. Also with the chain part, i think u should add in a few more links. This is just my prefrence but i think that the blade should be faced down so when it attacks it, the crown will hit the monster instead of the back of the blade.

Well i made the blade face up cause they hit with the back in kingdom hearts but I also agree that Square Enix should make them hit with the blade XD. Thanks for the tip


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Post by ҳҲҳ ÐƐƔɪŁ ҳҲҳ Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:36 am

ToxicBoii wrote:
ҳҲҳ ÐƐƔɪŁ ҳҲҳ wrote:well i will be the first to CnC this. It is pretty good for your first attempt. Nothing to say about the robe. The keyblade on the other hand. The blade should be a bit bigger and also the crown should be spaced out more so u can actually see the space. Also with the chain part, i think u should add in a few more links. This is just my prefrence but i think that the blade should be faced down so when it attacks it, the crown will hit the monster instead of the back of the blade.

Well i made the blade face up cause they hit with the back in kingdom hearts but thanks for the tip

no problem and idk it just seems like its more logic to hit with the crown lol. Besides Square Enix is dumb for making it that way lol.

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Post by Jojo Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:49 am

I say the artwork is very well done except axel's chakrams try to make them a little bigger and darker cause u can barely see it on the charector otherwise i like the designs

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Post by Guest Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:35 am

You should shade it more.

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Post by =========== Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:40 am

Where are the shades on your drawing?
And the Roxas Overall is a bit misaligned.

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Post by ♥ Thu Mar 22, 2012 5:55 pm

I like it Surprised.

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Post by Jojo Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:49 pm

The chakrams look better but the blades need to be longer also less bulgy

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Post by Lucina Fri Mar 23, 2012 3:30 pm

those are all pro F3

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Post by Nikee Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:19 pm

StomKoekje wrote:You should shade it more.

Agreed ^^ I have nothing to say about the first outfit though. But the rest should be shaded. it looks kinda plain f3

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Post by Knives Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:28 pm

Not bad. The overall, however, is too dark for maple-like items in black. Th light shines upon all-black items greatly, so using a very dark gray would be appropriate as far as lighting goes.

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Post by herolegacy Fri Mar 23, 2012 8:18 pm

Shade shade that i talking about and about the chakram it so thin, u should idk making an outline 1st and do some shade o3o
dis is my chakram lolololol My Kingdom Hearts stuff Finished.
edit:naw just kidding credits to my friend o3o


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Post by {GFX}Critical{WZ} Fri Mar 23, 2012 8:36 pm

herolegacy wrote:Shade shade that i talking about and about the chakram it so thin, u should idk making an outline 1st and do some shade o3o
dis is my chakram lolololol My Kingdom Hearts stuff Finished

What odd's that I seen a chakram looking EXACTLY like that from another forum from a guy I used to know. Hmmmmmm :/

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Post by Huzzah Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:40 pm

Very nice effort. I won't try to say anything too critical, since I have no right to do so, but the Sitar...seems a bit small, perhaps it should fit as a 2 handed, or similar, type of weapon. As for the overall, good job but needs a teeny tint of lighting on some parts. The chakrams can use a good shade of blood red on its handles. In general, cool shit.

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Guys toxic boy is currently away

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