2nd Attempt with fireworks
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- fuckboiii.com
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2nd Attempt with fireworks
I think that I'm getting Better...
- RayStormX
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Re: 2nd Attempt with fireworks
everytime you make an animation you get better, at least that's how it works XD
- <3
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Re: 2nd Attempt with fireworks
Very nice!
the effects were ok (at the first jump it looks like the character about to FALL)....u can get better
u can add some colors, play with the background and have fun.
i think that will make the animation better and u are good.
7.5/10! (i think u can be better man)
Good day,Rail.
the effects were ok (at the first jump it looks like the character about to FALL)....u can get better
u can add some colors, play with the background and have fun.
i think that will make the animation better and u are good.
7.5/10! (i think u can be better man)
Good day,Rail.
- Junnesejer
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Re: 2nd Attempt with fireworks
Super nice for a 2nd attempt! The jump (when he is about to go back) should be improved.
- HolyBelief
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Re: 2nd Attempt with fireworks
The both Radical Blur jump is badly done, by that i mean not enough Ease.
Also whole animation are choppy but this is your second animation, you'll improve better ;o.
Also whole animation are choppy but this is your second animation, you'll improve better ;o.
- Knives
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Re: 2nd Attempt with fireworks
Sweet. The evasive roll looks like it could use some more force to it. Why I emphasized force, is to symbolize a farther leap with more power. I still don't understand that program, though...
- fuckboiii.com
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Re: 2nd Attempt with fireworks
Thanks Guys! Now that u mention it The Jump Does Looks Weird :/
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