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fuckboiii.com

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Post by fuckboiii.com Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:19 am

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I think that I'm getting Better...

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Post by RayStormX Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:59 am

everytime you make an animation you get better, at least that's how it works XD

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Post by <3 Fri Feb 03, 2012 7:34 am

Very nice! Wink
the effects were ok (at the first jump it looks like the character about to FALL)....u can get better
u can add some colors, play with the background and have fun.
i think that will make the animation better and u are good.
7.5/10! (i think u can be better man)
Good day,Rail.

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Post by Junnesejer Fri Feb 03, 2012 8:07 am

Super nice for a 2nd attempt! The jump (when he is about to go back) should be improved.

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Post by HolyBelief Fri Feb 03, 2012 3:56 pm

The both Radical Blur jump is badly done, by that i mean not enough Ease.
Also whole animation are choppy but this is your second animation, you'll improve better ;o.

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Post by Knives Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:17 pm

Sweet. The evasive roll looks like it could use some more force to it. Why I emphasized force, is to symbolize a farther leap with more power. I still don't understand that program, though...

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Post by fuckboiii.com Sat Feb 04, 2012 1:06 am

Thanks Guys! Now that u mention it The Jump Does Looks Weird :/

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