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Post by herolegacy Tue Nov 22, 2011 9:19 pm

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Post by Knives Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:08 am

Not saying that your ideas are bad or anything... Just needs a bit more work.

The half masks shouldn't be cut straight down. Take the Maple perspective into thought. It would need to be curved for a more realistic effect.

The glasses (all 3) need better pixel work around the transition area.

These wings:
https://2img.net/h/i1235.photobucket.com/albums/ff429/hero2legacy/Anepicfailurepsiforgottooutlineinthemidleofthewing.png
https://2img.net/h/i1235.photobucket.com/albums/ff429/hero2legacy/50complete.png
The wings with red outlines would look better with a glow.

The second android headgear needs better shading.

The first hat needs WAY more shading.

Forgive me if I sound like a critic. Items like these require an eye for perfection (as stated by Barkey). If you need help with things like these, there is a tutorial posted by Barkey about the basics of GFX (I believe).



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Post by Leader Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:33 pm

On the androids, the shading needs to be improved

Example: https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img69/443/blandroids.png

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Post by Knives Wed Nov 23, 2011 3:00 pm

Leader wrote:On the androids, the shading needs to be improved

Example: https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img69/443/blandroids.png
I do believe I said that... Anyway, he's right. Just like that.

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Post by Leader Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:02 pm

[Nether]_Knives wrote:
Leader wrote:On the androids, the shading needs to be improved

Example: https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img69/443/blandroids.png
I do believe I said that... Anyway, he's right. Just like that.

Probably should have read you're post :c

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Post by herolegacy Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:26 am

[Nether]_Knives wrote:Not saying that your ideas are bad or anything... Just needs a bit more work.

The half masks shouldn't be cut straight down. Take the Maple perspective into thought. It would need to be curved for a more realistic effect.

The glasses (all 3) need better pixel work around the transition area.

These wings:
https://2img.net/h/i1235.photobucket.com/albums/ff429/hero2legacy/Anepicfailurepsiforgottooutlineinthemidleofthewing.png
https://2img.net/h/i1235.photobucket.com/albums/ff429/hero2legacy/50complete.png
The wings with red outlines would look better with a glow.

The second android headgear needs better shading.

The first hat needs WAY more shading.

Forgive me if I sound like a critic. Items like these require an eye for perfection (as stated by Barkey). If you need help with things like these, there is a tutorial posted by Barkey about the basics of GFX (I believe).




I know my gfx design sux.I will improve my skills of gfx designing.Btw knives can show me the link of basics of GFX

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Post by Pazz Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:29 am

herolegacy wrote:
I know my gfx design sux.I will improve my skills of gfx designing.Btw knives can show me the link of basics of GFX

You mean like this?
https://dchaosms.forumotion.net/t871-guidlines-to-spriting-by-sai

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