Tobi mask / Naruto Bandana

Alright, ummm, not to be rude or anything, but I kinda want you to re-do these fully. :C

I feel like you could put in MUCH more effort into what you have shown here.


The mask's shape should be more longer, like an oval, so that it's kind of point-rounded
at the top, but smooth. The swirls.. well... aren't swirls. It almost looks like you just free-pencil'd
these in one attempt. With 0% zoom. So yeah, try to zoom in to give them more detail and perfection. Make each separation of the lines equal to eachother as they close in together.

For the head band, I'd suggest thinning it lightly so it doesn't look as thick, but also enlarging the size of the medal piece. That way yo0u could put a little but more detail into the insignia, but also make it look like a real sash. Which also brings me to the shading, in both items.

You have to understand that shading in maple sprites have key concepts. I posted a thread ALLL about it right here: https://dchaosms.forumotion.net/t871-guidlines-to-spriting-by-sai
So it'd be wise to study up on that if you want to progress more greater.