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Post by Knives Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:23 am

It's called Bound Soul. I need LE CRITICISM, so get started with the hate. All I know, is that there is a bit of recoloring and re-texturing required. And NO, it isn't gradient-based.

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Post by x3WiredLife Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:13 am

Looks awesome <3

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Post by [In]sane Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:53 am

Knives wrote:It's called Bound Soul. I need LE CRITICISM, so get started with the hate. All I know, is that there is a bit of recoloring and re-texturing required. And NO, it isn't gradient-based.

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Needs reduction on the tip, kinda looks like a needle. Keep it to 1 pixel, 2 at most but I really suggest 1 for this.
The whole sword looks like a razorblade with all that diagonal lines, Ive never seen a sword that had those. Same goes for the handle, you should
try to make it look more a Katana's handle if you intend to use diagonal lines. Try to work on a better transition from black to grey for the blade. Don't
make it such that it just looks like a horizontal line.(for some reason that design won't work on that sword)

Design worth, I think the curly part could use some extra company: like have 1 that extends to the back. A better guard for the sword will make the difference instead of a pentagon looking object.

This is just what I think should be changed from my perspective =/

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Post by ジョンWZエディタ♬ Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:37 am

Yeah o-o
A bit of changing size, coloring would help Razz

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Post by Villian Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:26 pm

I think it looks really bad ass, except for the handle. Maybe different colors or size? And the yellow circle at the bottom of it, is just weird to me. I really like the blade though.

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Post by Knives Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:40 pm

Well, I asked for criticism, and I got it. Thanks, guys. I was sure that something was wrong :/

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Post by ρяσησσв™ Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:39 pm

Looks cool but the end of the handle looks out of place.

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