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Post by Luce Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:02 pm

Name (How can we call you):Len

IGN:Luce

How long have you played D.ChaosMS EX:About 2years i think

How long have you been spriting: Well i have been making videos along time ago so i lost some skill but i think this will help me get some skill back

Why do you wish to be a GFX:If i do turn into a GFX i could create more items for DChaosMS and help the community if needed i am usually not busy so im free too do GFX you can contact me in Game or Skype

Your works (use spoiler):
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Your Skype/MSN:ijustliketorawr

Other (info about you):I Am 16 i like to play Soccer and Volley Ball my name is Len as u can tell i am Asian i like to watch alot of anime i have alot of free time soon i will be going to California August 8th


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Post by †Zero† Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:08 pm

gimme moar items bitch! and that shading is horrrible.

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Post by Luce Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:12 pm

TheDevilHeart wrote:gimme moar items bitch! and that shading is horrrible.

ok ok i will try to make more and fix the shading pls do not be so mean to me

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Post by Knives Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:38 pm

TheDevilHeart wrote:gimme moar items bitch! and that shading is horrrible.
That isn't CnC you're giving. Please be more considerate when giving CnC... You're going to depress him/her like that.

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Post by †Zero† Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:48 pm

owh sorry if i was mean to you i was just kidding but seriously you need more practice b4 applying
The shading on the headband is horrible + look gradient as i see or Dull (too lazy to open paint.net to check)
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Post by Luce Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:29 pm

ok u guys i made 3 more -.-

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Post by †Zero† Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:59 pm

Pillow + Gradient shading = NO JUST NO.
No offense was here

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Post by darkrown Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:37 am

as devil heart says, i spot lots of pillow shading, jaggies and banding. you've narrowed down the concept and general outline pretty well, but your colors and shading still need lots of work. take a look here:

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lots of useful tools, resources, tutorials etc especially useful for beginner pixel artists. i also suggest looking around the site, it has some pretty amazing pixel artists lurking around Smile

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Post by Luce Wed Aug 01, 2012 1:04 am

Thx ill mabey create more tommorrow with these tutorials Smile

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Post by Luce Wed Aug 01, 2012 1:35 am

darkrown wrote:as devil heart says, i spot lots of pillow shading, jaggies and banding. you've narrowed down the concept and general outline pretty well, but your colors and shading still need lots of work. take a look here:

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lots of useful tools, resources, tutorials etc especially useful for beginner pixel artists. i also suggest looking around the site, it has some pretty amazing pixel artists lurking around Smile


hey can u pls give me tutorial :< pls pls that site some pages are broken and i cant find good tutorials pls i would do anything to get better at spriting =.= and i do not really know wut pillows are and im really bad at shading so ill do anything to get better

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Post by darkrown Wed Aug 01, 2012 1:53 am

Luce wrote:
hey can u pls give me tutorial :< pls pls that site some pages are broken and i cant find good tutorials pls i would do anything to get better at spriting =.= and i do not really know wut pillows are and im really bad at shading so ill do anything to get better

this is an example of pillow shading:
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in the first image the shading is concentrated around the center of the image, basically adding new layers of color starting from the center of the piece. you want to avoid this, because it's not realistic at all, it eliminates texture from objects, and it looks ugly like hell. in the second image, there is a clear light source (top right) which makes the object look like a sphere instead of a circle with a few colors thrown on it.

and i have given you enough food for thought for now, i believe. yes, some tutorials on the list are down, but there's A TON of them still there for you to use.

also, a tip. don't skip huge walls of text, they're there for a reason. you'll never master pixels if you don't know the theory first.

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Post by fuckboiii.com Wed Aug 01, 2012 6:26 am

Gradient, Pillow shading. You'll like to add some depth into the shading.

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Post by Revenge Wed Aug 01, 2012 9:53 am

Luce wrote:
darkrown wrote:as devil heart says, i spot lots of pillow shading, jaggies and banding. you've narrowed down the concept and general outline pretty well, but your colors and shading still need lots of work. take a look here:

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lots of useful tools, resources, tutorials etc especially useful for beginner pixel artists. i also suggest looking around the site, it has some pretty amazing pixel artists lurking around Smile


hey can u pls give me tutorial :< pls pls that site some pages are broken and i cant find good tutorials pls i would do anything to get better at spriting =.= and i do not really know wut pillows are and im really bad at shading so ill do anything to get better

Don't Double Post.

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Post by Luce Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:41 am

ok i know now i will be fixing them today ^_^ and srry for the double post ....

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Post by Zachie Thu Aug 02, 2012 4:48 am

ALRIGHT LET ME JUST GIVE ME HONEST AND HARSH CnC.

To be honest. All of them are horrible. I'm sorry but it had to be done.

Let's start shall we?

We want spriters who can sprite PIXEL BY PIXEL.
In all of these so called ''sprites.'' You're using the gradient tool. That's bad because of one reason. That's not fucking pixel by pixel.
As for the hoverboard. To be honest. It's horrible. Just plain horrible. It's nothing but a few sprites. If it's a mount. At least have the decency to make the entire spritesheet for it.


I can tell that you fucking rushed everything.
About the 2 years thing. I find it hard to believe.

That's all i have to say.

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Post by darkrown Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:27 am

Zachie wrote:ALRIGHT LET ME JUST GIVE ME HONEST AND HARSH CnC.

To be honest. All of them are horrible. I'm sorry but it had to be done.
Let's start shall we?
We want spriters who can sprite PIXEL BY PIXEL.
In all of these so called ''sprites.'' You're using the gradient tool. That's bad because of one reason. That's not fucking pixel by pixel.
As for the hoverboard. To be honest. It's horrible. Just plain horrible. It's nothing but a few sprites. If it's a mount. At least have the decency to make the entire spritesheet for it.
I can tell that you fucking rushed everything.
About the 2 years thing. I find it hard to believe.

That's all i have to say.

this is harsh, but is definitely NOT CnC. his work may not be gfx team quality, but he still tried. by calling his work "horrible" you aren't making his art better, and you're definitely not helping him becoming a better artist.

also, if you zoom in, you can clearly see that he did not use the gradient tool, because the pixels don't line up as they would if they were part of a gradient.

that's all i have to say.

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Post by †Zero† Thu Aug 02, 2012 6:01 am

All your items except the hover board and pikachu tail(im not sure about the tail, i'm too tired to open my spriting tool so yeah) are full of Gradient shading.


What is gradient shading?

Its The most hating enemy of spriters. So what is it?

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This is an example of Gradient shading, its what you do when you keep changing a color contrast, so lets start like this.
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SAY NO TO THE PICTURE ABOVE


If you are asking your self how to avoid it? lets me show you how. (This is how i make my palette so don't judge me if this wrong tyvm)

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Okay! You clearly see that i use orange, yellow, red as my palette BUT i only use 3 contrast on each color
1. Bright
2. Dark
3. Darker
and then i move on Yellow and orange with the same 3 contrast.

Why i choose yellow and orange and red? Because they are close to each other in the palette of each Spriting programs, but then make don't make your palette boring like above, spriting need creativity so yea as long as you see any color matched then use it.
I hope this will help you get better kthxbai.

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Post by ~J () R l) /\ N~ Thu Aug 02, 2012 6:50 am

I wanted to try one too! And hope u will try even harder!

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Post by DJ~Pepsi Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:59 am

Zachie wrote:ALRIGHT LET ME JUST GIVE ME HONEST AND HARSH CnC.

To be honest. All of them are horrible. I'm sorry but it had to be done.

Let's start shall we?

We want spriters who can sprite PIXEL BY PIXEL.
In all of these so called ''sprites.'' You're using the gradient tool. That's bad because of one reason. That's not fucking pixel by pixel.
As for the hoverboard. To be honest. It's horrible. Just plain horrible. It's nothing but a few sprites. If it's a mount. At least have the decency to make the entire spritesheet for it.


I can tell that you fucking rushed everything.
About the 2 years thing. I find it hard to believe.

That's all i have to say.

No need to be such a jerk bro,what the heck is your problem? How do you know he/she rushed everything? They could be a beginner and it takes them at least that long to make it look like that,and the 2 year thing really isn't hard to believe,you act as the person worked on a sprite everyday for one year,365 days. I bet you out of those two years,they probably only practiced 300/730 days,you expect to much,some people are slow learners and no need to bash on them.

And I believe you shouldn't even be posting,because I doubt you know what a CnC is,critic and criticize,it's good you're being harsh and honest,but in your post you only taught him/her "1" thing and that's not to use gradient maps,the rest is stuff that's unnecessary.

If you're going to CnC do it right,and bring out the positives to it to. I definitely find these great sprite,however I believed he/she definitely needs to fix some things.

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Post by Luce Thu Aug 02, 2012 11:49 am

1 . i Used a Pencil only ....
2.i Know i Suck
3.i Did Pixel By Pixel
4.the 2years things is true
5.I did not rush
6.i did not give the whole sprite sheet because this is just an app not a real sprite for the game...

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Post by Logan Thu Aug 02, 2012 2:38 pm

The pictures arent loading for me :/

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Post by Xeclipse Thu Aug 02, 2012 3:45 pm

Logan wrote:The pictures arent loading for me :/
you could try to restart your comp ,reload page, or reinstall flash thats wut i did just trying to help Smile

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Post by Revenge Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:09 am

Hell No Dude ^^^^^^^^.right click on the unloaded image and click on Open image in new tab or try reloading the page.

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Post by Xeclipse Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:40 am

Kill4Fun wrote:Hell No Dude ^^^^^^^^.right click on the unloaded image and click on Open image in new tab or try reloading the page.

yeah that works too :/

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Post by TheNamesRenzo Sat Sep 01, 2012 4:42 pm

Nice =0

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