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Post by Xeclipse Mon Jul 09, 2012 3:33 pm

Closed meh i think il stop the gfx application il go practice more then maby il try again in a few months
p.s to much stuff going on don't wanna cause argument on this i think il just enjoy summer instead of focusing on the forums so don't bother to reply and also to minh il keep in mind on what you said.


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Post by Tarnu12 Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:28 pm

Some of them look messed up like the first sword.

Is there proof its yours?
Put your name somewhere in the picture

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Post by †Zero† Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:40 pm

Bad Shape. Wierd shading

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Post by Xeclipse Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:19 am

TheDevilHeart wrote:Bad Shape. Wierd shading

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i was trying to make a scifi and death wepons i guess il do something normal not all messed up ty for the feed back very apreciated Smile

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Post by Lucina Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:13 am

hmm u still need some work on those swords and keyblade like shape sword

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Post by †Zero† Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:18 am

Integrity wrote:hmm u still need some work on those swords and keyblade like shape sword
They all need to be redone everything LOL too wierd shading hurting mah eyes D:<

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Post by Xeclipse Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:50 am

TheDevilHeart wrote:
Integrity wrote:hmm u still need some work on those swords and keyblade like shape sword
They all need to be redone everything LOL too wierd shading hurting mah eyes D:<
thats wut im doin lol i showed a friend the sprites all he said was TOO BRIGHT IT BURNS MAH EYES so redoin it

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Post by †Zero† Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:09 am

THEKYLEONE wrote:
TheDevilHeart wrote:
Integrity wrote:hmm u still need some work on those swords and keyblade like shape sword
They all need to be redone everything LOL too wierd shading hurting mah eyes D:<
thats wut im doin lol i showed a friend the sprites all he said was TOO BRIGHT IT BURNS MAH EYES so redoin it
Its not TOO bright! You just put shading in the wrong place

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Post by Xeclipse Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:53 am

TheDevilHeart wrote:
THEKYLEONE wrote:
TheDevilHeart wrote:
Integrity wrote:hmm u still need some work on those swords and keyblade like shape sword
They all need to be redone everything LOL too wierd shading hurting mah eyes D:<
thats wut im doin lol i showed a friend the sprites all he said was TOO BRIGHT IT BURNS MAH EYES so redoin it
Its not TOO bright! You just put shading in the wrong place

im fixing stuff up /redoing everything

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Post by Tarnu12 Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:50 pm

Looks better.

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Post by †Zero† Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:27 pm

Good! some of their shape still wierd, try to work on the shading ( LIGHT FROM TOP LEFT! USE UR HEAD!!) Kthxbai

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Post by Xeclipse Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:19 pm

TheDevilHeart wrote:Good! some of their shape still wierd, try to work on the shading ( LIGHT FROM TOP LEFT! USE UR HEAD!!) Kthxbai

some of them are fliped lol I did light from top left and I compared where the light source comes from on the swords its diffrent from the polearms the light on the gun is retarted ino that just got lazy with it its in the misc area so it shouldn't be used also i need to work on better shapes for the pole arms swords im ok at kthxbai

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Post by †Zero† Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:27 pm

THEKYLEONE wrote:
TheDevilHeart wrote:Good! some of their shape still wierd, try to work on the shading ( LIGHT FROM TOP LEFT! USE UR HEAD!!) Kthxbai

some of them are fliped lol I did light from top left and I compared where the light source comes from on the swords its diffrent from the polearms the light on the gun is retarted ino that just got lazy with it its in the misc area so it shouldn't be used also i need to work on better shapes for the pole arms swords im ok at kthxbai
The only thing i can see that fit my eyes is the 1st polearm from the LEFT to the RIGHT and the Dagger at the Right corner
Still there some mistake at the shading of the polearm keep up your work! Don't be raging at CnC f3 LOL

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Post by Xeclipse Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:48 pm

TheDevilHeart wrote:
THEKYLEONE wrote:
TheDevilHeart wrote:Good! some of their shape still wierd, try to work on the shading ( LIGHT FROM TOP LEFT! USE UR HEAD!!) Kthxbai

some of them are fliped lol I did light from top left and I compared where the light source comes from on the swords its diffrent from the polearms the light on the gun is retarted ino that just got lazy with it its in the misc area so it shouldn't be used also i need to work on better shapes for the pole arms swords im ok at kthxbai
The only thing i can see that fit my eyes is the 1st polearm from the LEFT to the RIGHT and the Dagger at the Right corner
Still there some mistake at the shading of the polearm keep up your work! Don't be raging at CnC f3 LOL

naw im not raging feedback like this encourages me to work harder so ty Smile gotta be positive negativity wont get me anywhere also i see what you meant by the first polearm and the dagger

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Post by Magnus Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:05 am

Let's start with CnC.

You used brush on the hair. Didn't you? We're looking for people who can sprite PIXEL BY PIXEL. As for the scythes.

Remember one important thing. Light comes from the top left to right. [Correct Me If I'm Wrong.]

As for the polearms and those tiny daggers. Some are editted items. [I Think.] So Yeah. Don't get me wrong . I'm not saying you're bad but I personally think you don't have what it takes to be a GFX.

Keep practicing though. Practice makes perfect. I wish you good luck in your spriting days!

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Post by Xeclipse Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:04 am

Zero wrote:Let's start with CnC.

You used brush on the hair. Didn't you? We're looking for people who can sprite PIXEL BY PIXEL. As for the scythes.

Remember one important thing. Light comes from the top left to right. [Correct Me If I'm Wrong.]

As for the polearms and those tiny daggers. Some are editted items. [I Think.] So Yeah. Don't get me wrong . I'm not saying you're bad but I personally think you don't have what it takes to be a GFX.

Keep practicing though. Practice makes perfect. I wish you good luck in your spriting days!

first i didn't brush the hair it would leave random dark spots ranging from light grey to dark all over it and the colors would mix in and makes it look like dope in my paint {not mspaint} which makes it a useless program . The program I use doesn't even have that tool (aseprite look it up ) and which polearm is edited same for dagger .secondly i did the light from top left lol some are fliped but still needs more work the {hammer and bottom right dagger} under gun were one of my first side prodjects put them in the see reaction but they aren't i'mportant more like a just there thing and keep this in mind editing a item will show a smiliar forms like if you make a sword the sword is the same but the handle is different i dont do that recoloring is pointless cuz everybody would know the item just in a diff color . and ty il keep the work up k ty bai.

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Post by Revenge Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:53 am

Off-Topic:
THEKYLEONE wrote:My works:Finished main prodject will add more tmr and later on during the week

it's Project

On-Topic: you keep improving but the shape of the weapons looks horrible,don't flip the weapons keep them as they was when you created them.

Off-Topic Again: -Looks at your signature- Maplemation is not fucking Japanese you dumbass xD it's in english.

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Post by Xeclipse Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:11 pm

Kill4Fun wrote:Off-Topic:
THEKYLEONE wrote:My works:Finished main prodject will add more tmr and later on during the week

it's Project

On-Topic: you keep improving but the shape of the weapons looks horrible,don't flip the weapons keep them as they was when you created them.

Off-Topic Again: -Looks at your signature- Maplemation is not fucking Japanese you dumbass xD it's in english.

gotta fix that and ty il do that next time / today k ty bai

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Post by Revenge Wed Jul 11, 2012 1:42 pm

i suggest you remaking the items we already told you,bad shape :C

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THEKYLEONE wrote:someday il join maplemation right now its only a dream

it's i'll C:

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Post by Xeclipse Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:01 pm

Kill4Fun wrote:i suggest you remaking the items we already told you,bad shape :C

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THEKYLEONE wrote:someday il join maplemation right now its only a dream

it's i'll C:

thats what im doing also screw polearms im better with swords >:c


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Post by Logan Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:36 pm

Not a fan of the shapes, the artwork isnt very good..

2/5

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Post by Xeclipse Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:52 pm

Logan wrote:Not a fan of the shapes, the artwork isnt very good..

2/5

alright im cool with that everybody has diffrent opinions so a 2/5 its better then 0/5 also mainly im better with swords then pole arms and im doing hair so more to come just wait mmk Smile

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Post by Revenge Thu Jul 12, 2012 6:03 am

You are improving my friend,now i don't see too much mistakes in the shape.if someone will find out you stole that shit somewhere i can tell you it's auto-denied.if it's not then Good luck.

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Post by Logan Thu Jul 12, 2012 1:46 pm

THEKYLEONE wrote:
Logan wrote:Not a fan of the shapes, the artwork isnt very good..

2/5

alright im cool with that everybody has diffrent opinions so a 2/5 its better then 0/5 also mainly im better with swords then pole arms and im doing hair so more to come just wait mmk Smile

i do see a lot of potential in you, if you keep working you will improve big time Very Happy

the main idea is to work on the shapes Smile

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Post by Xeclipse Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:38 pm

Logan wrote:
THEKYLEONE wrote:
Logan wrote:Not a fan of the shapes, the artwork isnt very good..

2/5

alright im cool with that everybody has diffrent opinions so a 2/5 its better then 0/5 also mainly im better with swords then pole arms and im doing hair so more to come just wait mmk Smile

i do see a lot of potential in you, if you keep working you will improve big time Very Happy

the main idea is to work on the shapes Smile

ty Smile i'll focus more on the shapes when i sprite

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