Poem... (English + French)
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- (-Astronomy-)
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Poem... (English + French)
well...I have made a poem... give me your feedback...
My poem is in both English and french (im not sure if my french is accurate...still learning...).
WELL ENJOY!!!
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My poem is in both English and french (im not sure if my french is accurate...still learning...).
WELL ENJOY!!!
Last edited by [BETA]•๖ۣۜȺh'khąt๖ۣۜ.™• on Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:00 pm; edited 1 time in total
- Nikee
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Re: Poem... (English + French)
Ah you and your poems..
I feel that you are so much into literature.
I feel that you are so much into literature.
- (-Astronomy-)
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Re: Poem... (English + French)
Nikee wrote:Ah you and your poems..
I feel that you are so much into literature.
Apparently i am...its a potential minor i'll possibly pursue..
- Knives
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Re: Poem... (English + French)
Nicely done. Why did I have a feeling it would be really good?
- SamiiJY
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Re: Poem... (English + French)
Fabulous ^^
- Vourdeox
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Re: Poem... (English + French)
Indeed it is.SamiiJY wrote:Fabulous ^^
The only thing I didn't like was the usage of 'Thou'. It feels a little forced.
Other than that, it's a great piece.
- {~Mikazuki~}
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[BETA]•๖ۣۜȺh'khąt๖ۣۜ.• wrote:well...I have made a poem... give me your feedback...-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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My poem is in both English and french (im not sure if my french is accurate...still learning...).
WELL ENJOY!!!
We have a soon to be Shakespear in the house <3
Well composed and written.
-Mikazuki- <3
- khuddin1992
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Re: Poem... (English + French)
dude that awesome. keep it up. i bet you can success ^^
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