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Post by (-Astronomy-) on Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:45 pm

well...I have made a poem... give me your feedback...
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Poem... (English + French) GrowthPoemEF
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My poem is in both English and french (im not sure if my french is accurate...still learning...).

WELL ENJOY!!!


Last edited by [BETA]•๖ۣۜȺh'khąt๖ۣۜ.™• on Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:00 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Post by Nikee on Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:51 pm

Ah you and your poems..
I feel that you are so much into literature.

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Post by (-Astronomy-) on Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:02 pm

Nikee wrote:Ah you and your poems..
I feel that you are so much into literature.

Apparently i am...its a potential minor i'll possibly pursue..

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Post by Knives on Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:07 pm

Nicely done. Why did I have a feeling it would be really good?

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Post by SamiiJY on Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:12 am

Fabulous ^^

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Post by Vourdeox on Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:20 am

SamiiJY wrote:Fabulous ^^
Indeed it is.

The only thing I didn't like was the usage of 'Thou'. It feels a little forced.
Other than that, it's a great piece.

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Post by {~Mikazuki~} on Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:25 am

[BETA]•๖ۣۜȺh'khąt๖ۣۜ.™️• wrote:well...I have made a poem... give me your feedback...
Spoiler:
Poem... (English + French) GrowthPoemEF
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My poem is in both English and french (im not sure if my french is accurate...still learning...).

WELL ENJOY!!!

We have a soon to be Shakespear in the house <3 Very Happy
Well composed and written.

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Post by khuddin1992 on Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:21 am

dude that awesome. keep it up. i bet you can success ^^

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