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Post by զሀiռርվ Mon May 07, 2012 11:51 pm

http://www.fileize.com/view/e93350fd-4d4/

I was bored at home so i tot to myself hey why not make an animation to kill time so yea. I know it sucks....

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Post by im gay Tue May 08, 2012 12:16 am

Not bad on your first, but

-There's misalignment mostly everywhere o-o
-I suggest not putting the guy in his walk pose after he stops
-Try adding a little slide at the end when he's done walking to add smoothness to the animation.
-Choppy and Rough though

You've got the potential for this :]

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Post by Ғяιэᴎᴆѕнίр Tue May 08, 2012 1:11 am

It's Uhhh, Okay I Guess. But Yea Watch Repulse Said. Misalignment, Choppy, Awkward Stop... And ...

MILK-HAIL HAS MAGICAL LEGS O:

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Post by զሀiռርվ Tue May 08, 2012 3:46 am

HAHA. K ill work on it and post the next animation after my exams which ends in 2 days. Ill add more things to it so ya stay tuned Very Happy

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Post by fuckboiii.com Tue May 08, 2012 6:43 am

Why does he suddenly stops in one position? Is he some kind of.....Robot?

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