My First Try {Critique Welcome}

[ExileMember]

So, I decided to do a little something since I was bored. I've been looking at a lot of custom stuff on this forum so I decided to try too .

The first thing I did was just recolor some of Alpha's sprites.

I think it turned out blurry? Idk. But All credits for the original character and mask goes to Alpha, of course.

Then I tried to make Ichigo Kurosaki. Didn't go so well . I didn't have enough room for his hair, so i tried the vaizard mask. The shading is bad. I added the teeth but they didn't look right so I took em off. And I feel like I rushed it really badly. But here it is.

Lawl, the face is SO off, it's tragic. Oh well. I'll hopefully get better

[XDualBladezDedicated Member]

OMG THATS SO GOOD CAN ANY OF U GFX PPL ADD THE BANKAI SUIT XD

[ExileMember]

haha, thanks man. But it's just my first try. It's not good enough to be in the game =p.

[[In]saneHead GFX]

OMG THATS SO GOOD CAN ANY OF U GFX PPL ADD THE BANKAI SUIT XD

Easier said then done =/
there is a reason we rarely or never try to add stuff like custom clothes
-unless of course an owner likes it, then you got to provide us those 100+ images

other then that that outfit looks great =)

[terminallyCapriciousUltimate Member]

I'm sorry, but that mask is just like "wtf". Not really sure what you were attempting there.

But for the coat..:

⌐ End of sleeves need to be outlined.

⌐ Left (my left) should is too big.

⌐ Neck opening should be more in a semi-perfect V shape, not half of one.

⌐ Back of coat (or the Mercedes cape to what I can tell) has to be a solid colour.

⌐ Middle of pelvis area of the pants need to be outlined.

⌐ End of pant legs need to be outlined.

⌐ Right (my right) hand needs to be OVER the whole coat, can't be hiding behind a part of it.

⌐ More contrast in shades for the pants.



For the other image, it's simply a colour edit, so there's not much to CnC on that.

[ExileMember]

Yeah, don't worry about the mask =p.

⌐ End of sleeves need to be outlined. {Tried}

⌐ Left (my left) should is too big. {Didn't understand. I used a base sprite imported from Banned Story and didn't increase the shoulder size}

⌐ Neck opening should be more in a semi-perfect V shape, not half of one. {Tried}

⌐ Back of coat (or the Mercedes cape to what I can tell) has to be a solid colour. {Tried}

⌐ Middle of pelvis area of the pants need to be outlined. {Tried}

⌐ End of pant legs need to be outlined. {Tried}

⌐ Right (my right) hand needs to be OVER the whole coat, can't be hiding behind a part of it. {Tried}

⌐ More contrast in shades for the pants. {Eh...}

Thank you giving me these tips

[HarukainAverage Member]

looks better its not a bad lookin coat.

[ExileMember]

Thanks but I'm still not happy with it. I think I could've done better especially with the v shape of the neck opening. Well hopefully I get more tips and this weekend I can spend more time and effort on it to complete it.

[HarukainAverage Member]

im not sure if this part if a falt or not but at the bottom of the coat the red bit on the right shouldnt it get darker behind him not lighter?
and maybe add a darker colour at the back of the coat to give it more depth. this is just what i would try out if u understand any of what i just said haha. im just learning to so im still unsure as well so i could be wrong with what i just said.

edit: if u want tips on the mask maybe change the colour a little on the red parts where it rises and lowers.
the mask kinda kinda reminds me of the main charicter of god of war the whole pale skin and red bit of the eye

[ExileMember]

Thanks, ill take those into consideration and try it out.

The mask was supposed to be ichigos new vaizard mask but I had no idea how to do it and thus it just came out bad like that lol .

And I still need to fix that neck opening.

More critiques are welcome . I wanna improve my skills

[HarukainAverage Member]

i had a go with his mask its not a very easy shape D: and the teeth are soo hard T_T

[ExileMember]

Haha yeah it isn't but the half mask they already have In game is pretty awesome

[HarukainAverage Member]

here what i did its kinda annoying how i cant post it on here yet new member sux
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i need to make the teeth better

Edit: i went ahead and made the teeth better did a befor and afeter thing u can use if on yr char if u want haha i dono how good it is tho seeing as i have never seen a episode of bleach
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[ExileMember]

That's pretty good I like the second mask. This character I'm making right now is just to practice my skills so yeah =p

But I took some of your suggestions, did schtuff here and there


I still need to work on and finish the hair though.
Credits to Alpha for original Khaos Mask

[HarukainAverage Member]

hahaha ty and yeah that hair needs some work xD gl. yeah with my mask i just went by a pic a saw on the web so iv no clue if the eyes are right :/

[PazzUltimate Member]

I FEEL like im the only one that posted in the GFX fourms that can't sprite at all

[ExileMember]

Haha, I can't really sprite either. Just learning. =p

[HarukainAverage Member]

same here lmfao this is my first week of spriteing u should see the state of the ones i did earlyer this week T_T there really bad

[PazzUltimate Member]

Well... I never spirited in my life xD... Hmm... maybe once when I made a pokemon fusion with Rayquazza and Pikachu but I lost it somewhere in my old computer

[ExileMember]

But you made that sig of yours right? It's pretty awesome

[PazzUltimate Member]

But you made that sig of yours right? It's pretty awesome

That's Editing and Pasting and Stuffz.... Not Actually Spriting

[ExileMember]

But it's still GFX and I'm sure you can always learn to sprite , just as I am.

[PokableDedicated Member]

I think alpha's old eye color was better, nice job tho ^^

[ExileMember]

Haha thanks and yeah I like Alpha's old eyes better too. I was just playing around though.

Ignore the hair. I am so bad at it . The face is not my thing ><


Tensa Zangetsu


I think I'm going to stop with the Ichigo sprites and maybe work on custom clothes or a custom character for myself . More practice the better =D!

[PazzUltimate Member]

Haha thanks and yeah I like Alpha's old eyes better too. I was just playing around though.

Ignore the hair. I am so bad at it . The face is not my thing ><


Tensa Zangetsu


I think I'm going to stop with the Ichigo sprites and maybe work on custom clothes or a custom character for myself . More practice the better =D!

nice~ i like the sword... somebody like a few months ago tried to make that but i forgot his name....

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