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Post by Lucifica Tue Sep 04, 2012 6:27 pm

HERRO ALL ! ITS BEEN AWHILE SINCE I POSTED AND LOOKED FUR CNC but now I'm in a stuck-position where I don't know how to progress / get better so any type of CNC would be great ^^!

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I'm a lot better from what I used to do, Its not that gradient (orisitouo) anymore but I still feel I can improve.

-Currently: Learning how to make weapons/clothing cause I just can't figure out how to do a perfect outline for them.

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Post by Magnus Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:32 pm

The last hair is VERY VERY VERY unproportioned.

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Post by «•ĮRÑx X Fùśįøñ•» Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:07 pm

Every have ANYTHING positive to say?

On Topic: Really good keep practising Smile

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Post by Magnus Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:18 pm

ParagonX9 wrote:Every have ANYTHING positive to say?

On Topic: Really good keep practising Smile

Please joe. Do you have any idea what CnC Is? It IS Very Unproportioned. I'm giving CnC.

If i was doing what you were doing. Let's say she think's she's very good and commits the same mistake over and over again. You're the one not contributing.

I'm no genius but at least i know that telling someone that their good won't help them do jacks shit to improve. I Thought You Would Understand That Logic Joe. Being older than me. I guess i was very wrong.

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Post by Revenge Wed Sep 05, 2012 5:16 am

†Legacy wrote:
ParagonX9 wrote:Every have ANYTHING positive to say?

On Topic: Really good keep practising Smile

Please joe. Do you have any idea what CnC Is? It IS Very Unproportioned. I'm giving CnC.

If i was doing what you were doing. Let's say she think's she's very good and commits the same mistake over and over again. You're the one not contributing.

I'm no genius but at least i know that telling someone that their good won't help them do jacks shit to improve. I Thought You Would Understand That Logic Joe. Being older than me. I guess i was very wrong.

Yes,yes exactly as HolyBelief Said:

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Post by darkrown Wed Sep 05, 2012 5:55 am

†Legacy wrote:

Please joe. Do you have any idea what CnC Is? It IS Very Unproportioned. I'm giving CnC.

If i was doing what you were doing. Let's say she think's she's very good and commits the same mistake over and over again. You're the one not contributing.

I'm no genius but at least i know that telling someone that their good won't help them do jacks shit to improve. I Thought You Would Understand That Logic Joe. Being older than me. I guess i was very wrong.

i have to say i don't agree with your concept of CnC either. i don't think you understand what CnC is. out of the four hairstyles he or she posted, you only referred to a single one, about which you said was 'unproportioned', a very vague idea which doesn't really help.
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Harsh CnC is Constructive Criticism that goes into depth of the person's work.


CnC is supposed to be a balance between highlighting both the flaws of a piece, so the artist knows what to fix, AND the good parts, so they know what to work around/ highlight. nobody is asking you to tell everyone that you love their art, but when did that hurt anyone? if you just point out the bad stuff in an artist's work, you'll only discourage them, and in my book that's not helping them either.

that being said, the last hair's placement really is off. try and work with a character base. that way it'll be easier to check out if everything looks right. also, your highlights look good, but there's not enough contrast to the shadows, and this makes the strands and hair itself lack definition. my favorite of them is definitely the third one, but in concept and in color choice. you really seem to have a knack for this sort of thing. keep practicing and you'll be a pro in no time :"3

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Post by Lucifica Wed Sep 05, 2012 7:45 am

darkrown wrote:that being said, the last hair's placement really is off. try and work with a character base. that way it'll be easier to check out if everything looks right. also, your highlights look good, but there's not enough contrast to the shadows, and this makes the strands and hair itself lack definition. my favorite of them is definitely the third one, but in concept and in color choice. you really seem to have a knack for this sort of thing. keep practicing and you'll be a pro in no time :"3

Okiee, I'll work on that c: And I was never good with male hair's so LOL.
Really glad to be getting CNC from yu c;


†Legacy wrote:Please joe. Do you have any idea what CnC Is? It IS Very Unproportioned. I'm giving CnC.

If i was doing what you were doing. Let's say she think's she's very good and commits the same mistake over and over again. You're the one not contributing.

I'm no genius but at least i know that telling someone that their good won't help them do jacks shit to improve. I Thought You Would Understand That Logic Joe. Being older than me. I guess i was very wrong.

Don't start a fight on my post please, Just take it to PM geez. But thank you for contributing something.

ParagonX9 wrote:Every have ANYTHING positive to say?

On Topic: Really good keep practising

Thank you Joe ^^;

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