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Post by exBlade on Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:51 pm


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Post by im gay on Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:55 pm

Slow and choppy

Poses are misaligned, especially after some punches.

Some awkward pauses.

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Post by exBlade on Thu Jun 28, 2012 7:18 pm

Sorry it IS my first try and Im using flash O.O Im working on another less choppy and faster

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Post by im gay on Thu Jun 28, 2012 7:24 pm

No need to say sorry, just fix up your flaws.

You have potential for this first one.

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Post by exBlade on Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:07 pm

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1340930275
2nd attempt. I think it needs to be a teeny bit faster though. I'll fix it after dinner.

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Post by AndroidS3x on Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:38 pm

BladeMastahz wrote:http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1340930275
2nd attempt. I think it needs to be a teeny bit faster though. I'll fix it after dinner.

It's still pretty slow :/ And also you know can can resize your Signature right?... It doesn't even fit in the screen e_e

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Post by exBlade on Thu Jun 28, 2012 9:21 pm

REVISION 3 http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1340934636

MAY be a little too fast (at least I'm getting a little better O.O)

P.S I like my sigs like that O.O


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Post by (-Astronomy-) on Thu Jun 28, 2012 9:45 pm

BladeMastahz wrote:REVISION 3 http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1340934636

MAY be a little too fast (at least I'm getting a little better O.O)

P.S I like my sigs like that O.O
(Caution: this synopsis might not be accurate...)

well...its still a bit choppy on some frames...
an...y is there a line in the animation?
anyway...

it has a lot of potential...just attack that flaw...
[zwerk gaue ma~, fades away...]

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Post by exBlade on Thu Jun 28, 2012 9:48 pm

(-Astronomy-) wrote:
BladeMastahz wrote:REVISION 3 http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1340934636

MAY be a little too fast (at least I'm getting a little better O.O)

P.S I like my sigs like that O.O
(Caution: this synopsis might not be accurate...)

well...its still a bit choppy on some frames...
an...y is there a line in the animation?
anyway...

it has a lot of potential...just attack that flaw...
[zwerk gaue ma~, fades away...]


The line is the alignment line since I use Flash. Its a LITTLE choppy because I had it at 40 FPS and 100 frames for each movement.

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