First Animation

View previous topic View next topic Go down

.,...,,...,...,,,,

Average Member

Average Member

Posts : 85
Points : 109
Reputation : 3
Join date : 2011-12-13

First Animation Empty First Animation

Post by .,...,,...,...,,,, on Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:17 pm

I've recently started animating and made my first animation. When you see the character disappear and reappear, that was just my fail attempt of a teleport. Tell me whatcha think, I was just testing out things in this animation.

http://www.swfstore.co.uk/uploads/fc77f4a89d/First%20Animation.swf

Back to top Go down

Vourdeox

Average Member

Vourdeox
Average Member

Posts : 50
Points : 64
Reputation : 0
Join date : 2012-06-02

First Animation Empty Re: First Animation

Post by Vourdeox on Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:38 pm

That was fairly good for a first animation, the walk cycle was good although I think the character didn't move enough each step. The dash was ok, it looks a bit jumpy, assuming it was all frame by frame. Try using a tween for straight line movement, makes it smoother.

The teleport was actually pretty good, the character reacted to it (a stumble after the teleport). I think the only thing that made you think it was bad was the fact that there were no teleport effects, as they usually accompany teleports in animations.

In all, I think this was a great first effort and I hope you will continue animating and improving.

EDIT: I just noticed. The jump before the dash would look much better if the character wound up or crouched to get ready for the jump. It looks like he just flies into the air all of a sudden.

EDIT2: Oh. If you're going to have a simple, constant background, make sure it's in a seperate, locked layer so you don't accidentally move it during your animation. I noticed the background moves 1 pixel up then down, then 1 pixel up.

Back to top Go down

.,...,,...,...,,,,

Average Member

Average Member

Posts : 85
Points : 109
Reputation : 3
Join date : 2011-12-13

First Animation Empty Re: First Animation

Post by .,...,,...,...,,,, on Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:05 pm

thanks, I appreciate it

Back to top Go down

Sponsored content




First Animation Empty Re: First Animation

Post by Sponsored content

Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum