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Post by IamLawliet on Thu Jan 05, 2012 2:58 pm

Name - Takori
Nickname - Ori-Sama
Age - 16
Personality - Witty, Adventurous, Enthusiastic, Inspirational, has the tendency to take hold of things that others may consider have no use.
Hometown - [雲の都市] Kumo no toshi - ([ City of Sky or City of Clouds ]}
Location - The inner sanctums of the Baren Wasteland.
Occupation - Mechanic
Powers - The Gift of the Gods [ Thunder ]
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Back Story [ Here come my horrible description skills ] -

In Kumo no Toshi, there is a saying.
"Those who reach the sky, will be eternally in power!"
It is a bustling city, filled with sky scrapers and tall buildings and advanced technology FORMED IN THE CENTER OF THE WORLD.
Not too long ago, on the outskirts of town, overnight a glowing purple asteroid struck. . . and let off a powerful wave. Nobody really felt it, but nearby recon drones extracted the asteroid and brung it back to the city
The city RUNS on ECOWARE - a Commercial Company that utilizes "Kinshi sa rete iru dengen" ( Forbidden Power ) Which is just the name of the energy being sucked from the asteroid, but they profit so they don't really care. Kumo no Toshi is known for a tad bit of criminal activity here and there, but nothing too serious. . . . There are 5 Districts spread all over that are connected by power pipes underground, and most of the criminals are kept in the 2ND District which is considered the most dangerous.

FAR FAR AWAY from the city . . . Resides a small town: " Kihon-tekina nīzu no machi " [ Town of Basic Needs ]. This town is the only area that does not run on the asteroids energy. It's more of a grit, oil, gears, sand dune type of place.
There are sages there and nomads, schools, and churches.
Within' that Town, are the Baren Wastelands which is where most of the thrown-out & leftover tools/garbage is. There lies Takori. This is like his home, he's always creating crafty tools to benefit his everyday life, and he creates tall statues of himself but the wind always knocks them down. Takori spends most of his days training or watching his favorite anime's whilst eating ramen. Takori is so captivated with the shows he watches, he attempts to create some of his favorite characters signature weapons , but also create his own which include; Gauntlets, Remotes, and Explosives, but he tends to get carried away.
When Takori was a child he used to live in the city, and he was pretty wealthy.

One day his parents left to go get him some candy from the store, and their last words were " We'll be back short stuff! don't move a muscle, we love you!". . . but then his parents were killed in a car crash. . . And he never knew why they just left and never came back. . . He decided to try and live on the street. He didn't and couldn't understand why he had to do what he did, but he stole from stores and hospitals, and sold petty inventions just to get by. One day, he just decided to run away, and that he'd run as far as he can. When he decided he couldn't run anymore, he ended up in the sandy dune area near " Kihon-tekina nīzu no machi " and passed out, then a wandering nomad name Kora retrieved him and brought him to his house.

Young Takori now lives with Kora, His wife Risa and their Young Son, Lin. Lin and Takori became best friends INSTANTLY because Takori realized that Lin and him had the same interest in inventing, so they ran around causing havoc and inventing things. In the midst of night, invaders came and ransacked everything. Kora and a bunch of the rest of the Nomads tried to stop them, but were killed in the process. As one invader was about to kill Kora, his wife jumped in the way and they both were killed. . .

Years later, Takori and Lin support the town and try to do good. They reside in the Baren Wasteland, which is practically their little hideout. They spend time being taught life lessons and martial arts skills through the nomads, learning peace, respect, compassion, and love for all life. . . His 2nd Best Pal is a Robot Gorilla he created named ROBOGOR. The gorilla has been inputted with speech and other nifty technological tools but the speech tends to go haywire into gibberish, japanese , french, indian, ect.

The night the Asteroid hit, Takori was out taking a walk, thinking about his life. . . When he heard a voice. . . The voice said.
"Takori, you have a gift. hehe"

"What?, Who is there!?" Takori Replied.

"I will give you the strength to increase your gift. . . But there is a grave threat that is heading for your town and that city. . . You must be their protectors!"

"No way!" Replied Takori "Nobody helped me when I was there, I lived on my OWN! I struggled by myself, they can all go to hell!"

"No" The Voice Replied "That is not the way the nomads taught you . . . You must DEFEAT this menace at all costs. . . You will meet friends, you will meet foes. But keep a level head Takori . . . . . . . . . Your fate, it arrives."

"What? What Fa-"

*WWWWWWOOOOOOSSSSH*

Takori stood helpless watching the asteroid as it barreled towards him, when Lin tackled him aside.
*CCCRRRASH*
The asteroid crashed a few miles away and sent off the blast which blew back Takori.

"Here is your Gift" said the voice "From the gods. I have sent some all around the planet. It is now your decision on how you will use it. . . Nevertheless, the doom will arrive, and you must gather a team of everyone good who has gathered our gifts, and face it!"

Hours Later. Takori awoke to a tingling feeling. . . He ran to a bucket of water to observe that his eyes were a peircing purple. . . He could think quicker and clearer, and faster. As he touched the water he felt a shock. There was lightning surging throughout all of his body. He shouted loudly to the skies and there was a loud boom, as a volcanic explosion of purple lightning spurted out of him.

Takori didn't know what to do, he felt like an outcast at this point, but he knew that this gift was his to keep, and that he couldn't get rid of it. What he knew surely, was that he didn't know what this doom was, when it was going to come or how he was going to stop it. Where did the other asteroids go? Who else was effected? Who is good? Who do I trust?
It wasn't a question anymore, this is what he had to do.

The nomads sensed a large energy force in the North. It was rumoured that a long forgotten tribe of Ice Nomads lived there. . . Takori knew that the asteroid must have landed there and effected some people.

"I'll come with you!" Lin shouted
" Sure! :b " Smiled Takori.

Takori and Lin packed some necessities, said bye to their remaining loved ones and headed out as ROBOGOR followed behind.


Weapons -

Pack - o - Goodies : With Takori having heightened intelligence from the blast, his ability to create items is quicker, and with his followed love of anime, he has a bunch of rediculous and random weapons in here, he could pull out anything! but after a while he runs out of tools. . .

Power Bracelet - Takori created a Bracelet that the rest of the kids in his village teased him about. It emits a large flare that blinds nearby enemies.

Gauntlets - When included in hand to hand combat, Takori always has on his Gauntlets. Before the blast they were just normal, but now they surge purple, en roping the energy from inside of him. When charged, they can emit bolts of lightning and sparks. Since Takori has not fully mastered his energy and how it works, the damage level is not mediocre. It is enough to down an opponent for about 10 Seconds.

Power Saber - After discovering he had electronic powers, he created items to fight the job, which followed along with his power saber. Based off the light sabers he had scene on TV, he can create all types of blades, swords and katanas with his saber. Without being charged, it's just a handle, and he can only hold these electronical forms for about 1 to 3 hours. Before attacking he shouts " Dengen no sāberu!!" [ Power Saber ] and charges.

Rocky - Lins Invention given to Takori. a Custom Made, Chargable Jetpack that can keep Takori afloat.


SKILLS -

Martial Arts ---------
Takori's Nomads always taught him
" There is no greater Vengeance, than knowing you have won the battle. . ."
He was taught to be compassionate, fluid, conscious, and focused in contact and to not always rely on silly inventions because they will be his downfall, so Takori was always training with Lin to prepare himself.

- Kajukenbo ~ CONFIDENCE ~ Kajukenbo is a unique martial art style combining the techniques of KA-Karate, JU-Judo and Jujitsu, KEN-Kenpo, and BO-Boxing.

- Soo Bahk Do ~ COMPASSION - Soo Bahk Do is an ancient, traditional Korean martial art comprising hand and foot techniques. The art is renowned for its disciplined approach and emphasis on the tradition and technical aspects of martial art. Soo Bahk Do has unlimited horizons. Consistent training leads to improvement not only in physical ability, such as flexibility, strength, stamina and speed, but also mental focus and application of will. These benefits develop a sense of calm and quiet confidence in the practitioner. Popular Korean Art.

- Tang Soo Do ~ CARING - Tang Soo Do is a Korean martial art which teaches empty hand and foot fighting, fighting forms, self-defense, and weapons. Tang Soo Do also teaches people to live a healthy and harmonious life

- Kali Silat ~ FOCUS - Kali, meaning body in motion, is the Martial Art of the Philippines. Our Kali program consists of energy drills and sensitivity training utilizing hand eye coordination techniques with or without the use of weapons

GROWING POWERS -

Thunder Shocks, Plasma Blasts, Charging Electronics and being able to Restore power within 1 mile.

WEAKNESS -

Rubber, Cockyness , Pure Earth , Wave Power , Accelerated Suction of Thunder Power.



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[ When Takori is all Drained of his energy , he enters what he calls Hazard Zone Protection. a State composed by the nomads to let your body go, and be able to fight without the need of distractions or sense of pain, emotion, or any other uselessness. Takori changed this up and took this a little too much to heart, and loses all of his clothing, puts on his gauntlets [ uncharged ] and begins to fight. ][/SIZE]

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Post by ジョンWZエディタ♬ on Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:13 pm

Lol o-o
That so much things to read . . .
Seems fun? Razz

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Post by XDualBladez on Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:42 pm

cbb reading it all just saw the animations and pics Very Happy

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Post by LegendaryDuku on Thu Jan 05, 2012 5:12 pm

Sounds good owo

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Post by ∂єяρ on Fri Jan 06, 2012 12:13 am

needs more text

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Post by RayStormX on Fri Jan 06, 2012 12:18 am

This is such a random thing to post lol.....are you by any chance from maplemation? cuz they have a whole section just dedicated to biographies like this.

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Post by IamLawliet on Fri Jan 06, 2012 2:36 pm

Lolikr.

I was bored, and nah I'm not from maplemation, I already had this character and story for years. :]

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